Talk:Joseph Schwantner: New Morning for the World; Nicolas Flagello: The Passion of Martin Luther King/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:34, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• "and was released on the following Martin Luther King, Jr. Day in his honor." could work the wiklink to avoid repeating "Martin Luther King, Jr. Day" thing.
  • Like so? --Another Believer _(Talk) 15:00, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
• Billboard's Classical Albums chart" you've linked Billboard but not their classical chart here, any reason?
  • I cannot find an article specifically for the Classical albums chart. "Top Classical Albums" just redirects to "Billboard charts". --Another Believer _(Talk) 15:03, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
• "are performed with little pause" I get it but would everyone?
  • Would "The nine sections of the work are performed with little pause in between" be better? --Another Believer _(Talk) 15:03, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
    • "a brief pause in between" would be better! The Rambling Man (talk) 16:35, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
      • Done. --Another Believer _(Talk) 16:37, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
• Any chance of reception outside of the US?
  • I included as much reception as I could find... --Another Believer _(Talk) 15:03, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

GAN checklist

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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Mostly there besides what I wrote above.

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• On hold pending resolution of the trivial issues I noted above. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:48, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for taking time to review this article. Please let me know if there are any concerns that still need to be addressed. --Another Believer _(Talk) 15:03, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

As ever, you're welcome. Let me know when you're done, and I'll re-review. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:35, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

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